*this is a poem I wrote during high school. Unfortunately, it’s still pretty relatable for me.*
The depression inside won’t leave
Death will not come, so I still breathe.
I am weak; I don’t wish to fight.
On the inside, nothing is right.
Heart is so broken; life is bleak
Don’t know if I’ll make it a week.
It seems every night grows longer.
The pain within me grows stronger.
At night all I can do is cry.
Every day I just live a lie.
I can’t fake anymore smiles.
I cannot run any more miles.
Can’t live another day alone
Wish my heart was made of pure stone.
With no more feelings of distress
And nothing left to confess
Sorry you’re still feeling this way – it sure is a hard road sometimes isn’t it? It’s a difficult poem to read as no-one in their right mind likes the thought of other people suffering but I guess poetry is supposed to make you feel something and this does. Best wishes, G.
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My thoughts are with you. Please take care, suzanne ❤️🌷
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I actually like this piece it’s so real and to be able to write like this so raw is something I treasure in a person. I hope to see more of your work.
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Thank you for your kind words
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it is my pleasure. Always a fan of such rawness in an artist.
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Poetry will last many years. If its good and can stand on its own it will be as good 2o years later. Never quit writing
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Reblogged this on Jayne.press and commented:
Raw and Real words from Baffy Basics
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These feelings are never fun, but hopefully the act of expressing them is somewhat therapeutic.
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You weaved the words so beautifully. Loved it and I hope you come out of your pain soon. Waiting to see a happy you in your future verses. 🌸🦋🤗
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Very real and raw. I also struggle with these feelings, thank you for sharing yours. ❤
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I have also felt like this, all spaces are temporary!
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powerful. definitely going to include you in my prayers.
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